Flash Fiction
It was five in the morning. Maya woke
up to her brother continuously shaking her. It was pitch black outside. Maya
slowly realizes that today is the big day. She then gradually began to get
herself up. As Maya was getting ready ideas rummaged through her head. “Where
will I go? Who will I sit with at lunch? What if I get lost?” All those ideas
worried her as she ate her waffles and packed her lunch. One by one she placed
her shoes on and checked one more time in the mirror. She grabbed her backpack
and joined her mom in the car. The car's temperature was chilly which calmed her
nerves. The car ride was about ten minutes away from school. Maya looked out
the window the whole ride. She counted all the trees passing by, she counted
130 trees as she was making her way into the school’s carpool. It was time for
her to go to school. Saying goodbye to her mom she opened the door. Maya looked
back at her mom and closed the door. Maya started her journey through her
new school.
Like your details and the way you carried the story. Great Job
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